Segway

Chayse and Libby 

Target:  Purchasing managers of medium to large private security agencies.

Problem:  I need to find a product to make my company the most efficient in the market

Objective: I need to find a product to make my company the most efficient in the market

Strategy:  Demonstrate that Segway is the simple solution to make your company the best

Brand Drivers

Segway will label your company as innovative

Segway will make your company more efficient

Segway will make the company the leader in the business (king of the hill)

Segway will increase company profits and shares

Segway will make you the coolest

you're close. can you

you're close. can you restate your problem as more problem-like? "I need to make my company the most efficient in the market." Why? Answer why and you'll have a problem that will lead to better driver statements. Ex. Why? We can't compete on price. Then your stated problem is a little closer to being an objective - which is kind of how it's worded right now.